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2016雅思写作范文:健康类(1)

  健康类:

  Staying healthy by playing sports and eating well should be an individual’s duty to society rather than a habit for personal benefits. Do you agree or disagree? 保持健康是个人对于社会的责任,但是,不是使个人受益的良好习惯,是否认同?

  作家立场:个人保持健康即是对于社会的责任,更是对于个人有益。

  谋篇布局:让步反驳

  思路拓展:

  让步段:保持健康为何是尽到了社会责任

  1. 个人保持身体健康是个人履行社会责任的体现,因为个人减少了对于国家医疗资源的消耗。

  2. 个人保持心理健康是个人履行社会责任的体现,因为个人较少做出反社会行为。

  反驳段:保持健康为何是良好的个人习惯,对于个人有利

  1. 对于个人的利好:增加自信,减少忧虑,人生态度更加积极乐观。通过运动可以结实好友,这就意味着快乐的源泉更多。

  2. 对于家庭的利好:可以想象,个人健康状况令人担忧,家人必然痛苦和担忧(例如企业家和文体明星),因此个人健康可以乐观地实现家庭的和谐。

  3. 对于事业和学业的利好:个人健康可以提高学习效率,使人精力充沛地实现事业的挑战。

  薛鹏原创语料库:

  1. keep fit = keep wholesome = remains healthy 保持健康

  2. Happiness, lies, first of all, in health 健康是幸福人生的本源。

  3. Health could, to large extent, empower one to face up to career challenges enthusiastically and harmonize family life optimistically. 健康在很大程度上使人精力充沛地应对事业的挑战以及乐观地实现家庭的和谐。

  4. ……instill confidence into one’s heart 增强人的自信

  拓展: indoctrinate self-confidence into one’s heart 增强人的自信

  5. to see the sunny side 积极乐观

  拓展:be resilient = to be positive = be optimistic 很乐观

  6. strengthens the immune system 增强免疫系统

  7. A healthy people succeed better at work,respond better to stress, suffer fewer depressive moods and achieve more personal goals 健康者工作更有成效,积极应对压力,较少沮丧,可以实现更多个人目标。

  点评:健康对于个人利好的细节展开。

  拓展:healthy = sound = wholesome 健康的

  8. Many elite entrepreneurs or super stars usually suffer from various health-related problems due to excessive workload and huge mental pressure. 很多企业家和明星,由于工作和精神的压力,健康状况令人堪忧。

  9. It is conceivable that one’s poor health condition will inevitably bring a sea of agonies to the family members 可以想象,个人不健康,会给家人带来巨大的痛苦。

  10. As for the country,the increased proportion of wholesome citizens could greatly diminish the financial investment in the public medical treatment. 对于国家而言,健康公民的数量增加,公共医疗资金减少。

  薛鹏原创句型拓展语料库:

  1. Every individual could benefit a great deal from …… in many respects 个人在很多方面可以从……收益良多

  拓展:in many respects = in many aspects = in more ways than one 在很多方面

  2. Everybody could become the beneficiary of …… 人人都是……的受益者

  3. It is rather superficial to simply believe that …… 简单认为……是相当肤浅的

  4. Maintaining personal health could not only serve the good of the community,but importantly,conduce to individual life, family harmony and career prosperity. 保持个人健康不仅仅对于社会有益,更加重要的是, 健康有助于个人幸福,家庭和睦,事业辉煌。

  点评:主题句亮明作家立场

  5. Keeping fit is not only related to social responsibility but also links to personal happiness, which is more significant 保持健康不仅仅是个人的社会责任,更加与个人幸福相关,健康对于个人的意义更大。

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