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2016年雅思考试作文备考范例(7)

  雅思大作文主体段是比较难以进行个性化表达的部分,或者说在主体段想要结合个人的生活经历需要特别注意"分寸",因为如果主体段中的个人生活经历表达过多,则会造成降低文章论据"普遍实用性"和说服力的结果。那么如何达到说理和个人生活经历的平衡性呢?

  我们可以先看两段文字:

  Some people warn that the era of the silver screen is coming to an end and that people will eventually lose interest in going to the cinema. Do you agree or disagree with this view?

  讨论 interest in going to the cinema

  However, the cinemas in my home country are still full every weekend and when a new film is released we are all keen to go and watch it. In fact, many small cinemas have been rebuilt and we can now go to large centres that have six or eight cinema screens and show up to ten different films a night. An evening out at the cinema is fun and some films, particularly horror and science fiction films, are much better on the big screen.

  There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

  讨论 international music 重要性

  However, there is one reason why international music may be more important, and that is since it is widely liked internationally, it helps unite the world. I noticed this in Korea, when I saw young Korean boys dancing in unison to modern rock music. The traditional Korean music is often too difficult, high toned and not relevant to the lives of younger people.

  在第一段话中,作者结合自己国家的电影市场情况说,说明人们还是有兴趣去电影院看电影的;在第二段话中,作者结合自己去韩国旅游的所见所闻证明了国际音乐的重要性。

  从上面的这个例子中,大家就可以看到,这两个雅思大作文主体段的理由陈述都是和个人经历相结合的,所以文章显得很有个性化,但却完全不失辩论力度。这样的雅思大作文主体段写作方法是值得考生体会和尝试的。

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